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WindWalker
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0 posted 2007-10-06 07:37 PM


Ah!  But are we not the ancient ones--
shape shifters, form shapers, alchemists, dreamers?
Do we not create only to un-create and re-create,
trapping energy in form only to set it free once more?

“I” was born in a human form, trapped--
like a slave with no will and no choice
a name of sorts infused into my child’s mind.

As time would have it, I broke free of some bondage
to human expectations, traditions and common ego,
but for the name I carry weighing me down
with other people’s chains anchored in their past:

Does a name given at birth really define my beingness?
Does it not rather spell a group’s hopes and dreams?
Having re-discovered my ancient powers,
my own true roots anchored deep within the flowing magma;
within the bloodstream of my own sister Earth,
tell me: Do I not have a perfect, appropriate ‘right’
to choose that word, or words, called a name,
which I, only I, can recognize as being ‘me’?

Do I not have the complete right
to present my own identity to the world?
Or, for that matter, my many identities?
In the drama of life, am I not permitted
to play more than one part, from birth to death?

If you think not--whatever your reasons,
then tell me who “I AM”!
Dare to define what I have become
not in this life alone, but including all,
absolutely all!
my experiences as “me”
part of life and part of God:
Yes, dare, when even God would not!



© Copyright 2007 Sharran WindWalker - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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Eternity
1 posted 2007-10-06 07:51 PM


Interesting write. What we do with our life defines us, I think the name acquires significance in relation to our choices. (I don't agree that we have no will and no choice ...).

We can't think that all those called Joe or Mary or whatever evolve similarly, we are each unique and special. Free to define ourselves.

Appreciated your poem.

Love,
Margherita


secondhanddreampoet
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2 posted 2007-10-06 08:16 PM


Wonderful 'food for thought' throughout this grand-fine 'write'!

I am particularly fond of:

"my own true roots anchored deep within the  
  flowing magma;
  within the bloodstream of my own sister
  Earth,
  tell me: Do I not have a perfect,
  appropriate ‘right’
  to choose that word, or words, called a
  name,
  which I, only I, can recognize as being
  ‘me’?"

As a geologist (student of planet Earth and 'Deep-Time'); Universalist/'natural
philosopher' and person of deep Celtic roots [an ancestral 'belief system' often
rather similar to that of the "Native" (true) Americans]...my answer to the above
would be an absolute YES!

once again, very serious...long-sustained applause!!

---Soqwu Disgitisdi Gvdi

[This message has been edited by secondhanddreampoet (10-06-2007 08:59 PM).]

Midnitesun
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Gaia
3 posted 2007-10-06 10:25 PM


"Do we not create only to un-create and re-create,
trapping energy in form only to set it free once more?"

Yes, because we are all of the same chaotic cosmic energy source; never-ending, constantly recycling.

Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29
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South Africa
4 posted 2007-10-07 12:40 PM


Another thinking poem, WW!  Certainly we create and re-create because it is our choice to do so and within that creation process we discover who we really are.  What's in a name?  Nothing really because only our thoughts and actions define who we really are and possibly only to ourselves.  Those who are interested will know and the name just a name for those who aren't interested.  

We are all essentially only "Love" manifest as Tom, Dick, or Harry!

ArtSolstice
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5 posted 2007-10-07 08:38 PM


I've read this and re-read it many times since you posted it, WW. It is one very fine work.
Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural
6 posted 2007-10-07 08:41 PM


great read

ARCTIC WIND

The Lady
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7 posted 2007-10-08 09:06 PM




"“I” was born in a human form, trapped--
like a slave with no will and no choice
a name of sorts infused into my child’s mind."

WindWalker
you know how I feel about your work
and once again

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
8 posted 2007-10-09 09:31 AM


"What's in a Name"? ~ Lots! That is why I have several! Each one vibrating with a different aspect of who I am. (Numerologists have a tendency to do that! lol)

I found this to be a very provocative read ~ and I always enjoy reading your philosophical thoughts.


Linda/Earth Angel etc. lol

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