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Tim
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since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794


0 posted 2007-10-06 11:32 AM


distant bells
peal
ritualistic
in rhythmic knells
spiel
anapestic
mystic chords
of distant
hymn
as cryptic codes
ring
out within

© Copyright 2007 Tim - All Rights Reserved
Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
1 posted 2007-10-06 11:43 AM


Never seen your poetry!

like it alot, very well done

looking forward to your next one

See ya!

ARCTIC WIND

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
2 posted 2007-10-06 04:50 PM


A fine poem, dear Tim! Those bells are always inspiring.

Love,
Margherita

aziza
Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
3 posted 2007-10-09 12:25 PM


I look for your poetry.
I have not been disappointed - you write it well.

Alison

Warrior Bristo
Member
since 2007-07-28
Posts 96
Arizona
4 posted 2007-10-09 05:30 PM


wonderful!

warrior undefeated
  

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
5 posted 2007-10-16 11:34 AM


Enjoyed.
    Ida

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