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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2007-10-06 07:46 AM


The Days of Love Forest Glen

All around me
bears and werewolves,
in the shadows lurk zombies
and creatures with hooves.
Within these eerie
mountains and streams
not a minute passes
without a shrill scream.
Out here on the fring
on this dark moon night
nary a star is shining
within my farsight.
From mountain and valleys
echo blood curdling screams
awakening me from a
missing home dream.
From my belt hangs
my well used sword,
my strength and courage
assuring my rewards.
Just one more days journey
and from this forest I'll descend
where my sweetheart waits
in love forest glen.
Once I lay eyes upon her
my weary journey will
come to an end and the
festival of reconciliation
upon that day will begin.
These be the days of
Love Forest Glen.

JamesLee
06October
2007





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Earth Angel
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1 posted 2007-10-06 09:55 AM


Hi, James! Sounds like you are getting in the Halloween 'spirit' of things! Eerie! Ghoulish!

~ and then there is the oasis that your love provides! A glorious port in the storm!

Hugs to you, Island Man,

Linda

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2007-10-07 05:42 PM


Thank you Earth Angel for the wonderful response...James
LindsayP
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3 posted 2007-10-07 10:01 PM



Sounds a pretty scary place James but well

written, enjoyed.

Lindsay

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2007-10-08 03:36 PM


Thank you Lindsay...much appreciatied...James
jwesley
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5 posted 2007-10-08 08:07 PM


Very well done, James!!!

jwesley

garysgirl
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6 posted 2007-10-08 08:52 PM


I like this, James. Of course the hopeless
romantic in me loves this part...

Once I lay eyes upon her
my weary journey will
come to an end and the
festival of reconciliation
upon that day will begin.


Hugs,
Ethel

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2007-10-09 05:08 AM


Thank you jwesley and garysgirl for the wonderful responses...James
Marchmadness
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8 posted 2007-10-09 09:21 AM


I think you are a hopeless romantic, James.
We should all be so lucky.
                               Ida

Marge Tindal
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9 posted 2007-10-09 09:26 AM


JamesMichael~
The happy ending is *sighable*~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -     noles1@totcon.com   

vandana
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10 posted 2007-10-09 12:26 PM


good read
Enchantress
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11 posted 2007-10-09 01:15 PM


I'm with Marge here James..
The ending did make me *sigh*.
Well done!
Hugs~Nancy

~Autumn the year's last loveliest smile~

JamesMichael
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12 posted 2007-10-09 04:47 PM


Thank you Marchmadness, Marge, vandana and Enchantress for the wonderful responses...
followng the battles we endure comes the healing, the scars and the rewards...James

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