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OwlSA
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0 posted 2007-10-06 01:21 AM


CAUSE AND EFFECT
30 September 2007

Bob Dylan words
wrapped in orange,
and rain melodies,
lift wide, the rickety gate
to a million, mingling, forgotten pathways
- and misty, long ago senses
unfurl
like the arms of a ballerina
when the silvered notes cajole.

- Owl

© Copyright 2007 Diana van den Berg - All Rights Reserved
Marchmadness
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1 posted 2007-10-06 03:19 AM


Very nice, Owl. I like it.
                     Ida

Earth Angel
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2 posted 2007-10-06 10:02 AM


...and your soulful words have now had a rippling effect!


EA

OwlSA
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3 posted 2007-10-07 12:57 PM


Thank you Ida and Linda.  I am glad you both enjoyed it.

- Owl

Margherita
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4 posted 2007-10-07 08:27 AM


hmmmmmmm ... such delight you share,dear Owl!

Love,
Margherita

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5 posted 2007-10-07 09:17 AM


Diana~
This is simply LOVELY~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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OwlSA
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6 posted 2007-10-08 01:46 AM


Thank you so much, Margherita and Marge for your warm words.  

- Owl

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