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TinaTrivett
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0 posted 2007-10-05 03:33 PM



Smokestack forests
sprinkling gray ash on
new fallen snow
Window frosted
with abstract ice art
Like feathery pick-up sticks
made of glass
All loosely piled
one on top the other
Cold radiating from the pane


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Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural
1 posted 2007-10-05 03:37 PM


what an icey Morning it is

Lovely poem


ARCTIC WIND

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2007-10-05 03:38 PM


What a creatively poetic description of frosty  ice on the window panes.



EA


TinaTrivett
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3 posted 2007-10-05 08:09 PM


Thank you both so kindly.
Saunni
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4 posted 2007-10-05 11:46 PM


This Icy Morning poem is a write that, to me, would be hard to put into words. I love how you did it. Sauni

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OwlSA
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5 posted 2007-10-06 01:00 AM


All the way from sunny South Africa, I loved the chilly air of this icy moment, Tina.

- Owl

Marchmadness
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6 posted 2007-10-06 03:25 AM


Beautifully discriptive words.
                     Ida

TinaTrivett
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7 posted 2007-10-08 11:51 AM


Thank you both.
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