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Saunni
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0 posted 2007-10-03 11:14 PM



Should the days become to heavy
Should warmth seem hard to find
Should peace be a little lost
In it... keep in mind...
I'll hold the sun above you; forever if I have to
Take from me... just what you need
Oh, I'll be less so that you can be whole

Should the night be darker then before
Should strength forget to hold your hand
Should tears fall like the rain
In it... here I stand...
To remind you there is light; to share it with all my might
Take my heart... the deepest part
Oh, I'll be less so that you can be whole

Should hope feel miles away
Should courage rarely find the hour
Should tomorrow seem a bit to far
In it... become the flower
In the garden made with love; with everything I'm made of
Take my wind... to begin again
Oh, I'll be less so that you can be whole

... take most of me...
... take all of me...
I'll be less so that you can be whole

Sauni


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latearrival
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1 posted 2007-10-04 01:27 AM


I read this Beautiful! thanks for the share. "late"
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2 posted 2007-10-04 08:13 AM


Sauni~

I LOVE it when our members return 'home'~

This is lovely ... and your new photo is just gorgeous~

Bless you dear gal~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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sim0riah
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3 posted 2007-10-04 09:55 AM


That is the meaning of "Sacrifice" If only everyone had these thoughts just think how the world would be

Very Nice Job!!

Rich

Aimster
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4 posted 2007-10-04 10:16 AM


you speak of the greatest and deepest love that there is!! beautiful write!!

"Life is not measured by the breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away"

moondogz
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since 2007-05-01
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Great White North
5 posted 2007-10-04 11:08 AM


wow, that was beautiful and very touching.

            moon.

Margherita
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Eternity
6 posted 2007-10-04 11:30 AM


What a generous soul you reveal here, dear Saunni.
Unconditional love offered in beauty.

Love,
Margherita

Saunni
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West Virginia
7 posted 2007-10-05 11:29 PM


Thank you all so very much

Sauni:)
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adagio
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since 2005-03-19
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Marrero, La.
8 posted 2007-10-13 01:19 PM


sometimes my tears fall like rain too.
sometimes we all need that
very sweet !
adagio

JamesMichael
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9 posted 2007-10-13 04:12 PM


Wonderful...James
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