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The Ocean Sapphire
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The Ocean Sapphire |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
The Ocean Sapphire Way deep down, in the dark blue we desire, Poseidon created the beauty of the sapphire. Crystal clear, like the waters of heaven, The sapphire twinkles from tears that are frozen. Washed away, by the waves of the sea, And into our world as fine jewellery. Have you ever wondered how Poseidon did it? He took the oceans power and might and then added some moonlight. Way deep down, in the dark blue we desire, Poseidon created the beauty of the sapphire. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
I REALLY like this fine 'write'! [and NOT just because I am a geologist and mineralogist by original training!] I am especially fond of the opening and closing lines! serious applause!! p.s.: I like this poet's choice of "P.I.P.-land" UserName (ID) too! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
secondhanddreampoet WOW!, thank you and very impressed with you! i love to write about crystal's, gems and other minerals stuff ARCTIC WIND |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Talk about Damn! Yours is awesome!  |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Saunni DAMN, thank you GIRL! i also really enjoy reading your poems i look forward to more GIRL! ARCTIC WIND |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Hi Arctic Wind, This is definitely one of your best. Ida |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
marchmadness thank you! I AM HAPPY YOU ENJOYED IT! ARCTIC WIND |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Awwwww, AW, another gem from your pen!  "He took the oceans power and might and then added some moonlight." ~ So that's how Poseidon did it! 'Tis no wonder why I love to wear sapphires! Love 'n Sapphire Light, EA  |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
EA why thank you! again , i love to write about gems and stuff myself ARCTIC WIND |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Arctic wind and ocean sapphire make a truly brilliant couple! Enjoyed this greatly! Love, Margherita |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Marchmadness- thank you so much i am glad you think this poems is one of my best ARCTIC WIND |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
An enjoyable gem of a read! Sapphires are beautiful, as is your poem. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful...James |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Nice write Artic Wind Lindsay |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Margherita- I am so sorry for calling you marchmadness i messed up in the "m" names but thank you for your kinf response! ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Midnitesun- Why thank you ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Jamesmichael- Yet again you read my poem thank you ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
linsday P thank you so much- gald you enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
ahh another gem to add to my treasures...Lovely writing. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
GentilSpirit- Thanks i glad you are putting this in your treasures ARCTIC WIND |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Very nice. Enjoyed."late" |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Late- thank you so much have a great THANKSGIVING ARCTIC WIND |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
I love the ocean bathed in moonlight , I once wrote a poem titled "Beside the sapphire sea Hope |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
HopeS why thank you! ARCTIC WIND |
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