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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2007-10-03 06:11 PM


Blessings of Love

What if love
was just heartaches
and heartbreaks
and all of that.
What if it was broken dreams
and evil schemes
and a game for
fat cats and aristocrats.
To some it is
all of that,
but to those
that persevere
and hold love dear
the blessings of love
will become
crystal clear.

JamesLee
03October
2007



[This message has been edited by JamesMichael (10-04-2007 05:37 AM).]

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JL
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1 posted 2007-10-03 08:30 PM


"to those
that persevere
and hold love dear
the blessing of love
will become
crystal clear."

So true.  Nice writing James.

JL


Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.

LindsayP
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2 posted 2007-10-03 11:16 PM



A great write James, I thoroughly enjoyed

reading it, keep up the good work.

Lindsay

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2007-10-04 05:39 AM


Thank you JL and Lindsay for the nice responses...much appreciated...James
Margherita
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4 posted 2007-10-04 10:41 AM


Ahh, dear James, you got that right and beautifully so!

Love,
Margherita

ps you made me smile for those "fat cats and aristocrats" ... thanks for the smiles too.

Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2007-10-04 11:43 AM


JamesMichael~

'to those
that persevere
and hold love dear
the blessings of love
will become
crystal clear'


And it is crystal clear to me that you are one who does just that !!!

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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JamesMichael
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6 posted 2007-10-04 02:47 PM


Thank you Margherita and Marge for the wonderful responses...James
nakdthoughts
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7 posted 2007-10-04 05:28 PM


Very nice, JamesM...
enjoyed the flow~~

M

JamesMichael
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8 posted 2007-10-06 07:17 AM


Thank you Nakdthoughts for the nice response...James
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