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Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

0 posted 2007-10-03 04:28 PM


I love rain....except
When it rains for a week
And my garage roof leaks.
I love rain....except
When my hair
Looks like a tumbleweed,
Or a dandelion gone to seed.
I love rain....except
When my cranky cats can't go out
So they just lie around all day and pout.
I love rain....except
When I get wet from my head to my shoes,
For lack of the umbrella,
I'm too clumsy to use.
I love rain....except
When going anywhere is a pain
Because most people can't drive in the rain.
I love rain....
I really do!
                      
                               Ida Werrett

© Copyright 2007 Ida Werrett - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2007-10-03 06:04 PM


Driving in the rain seems especially hard to the drivers over here...some fools still drive like its not raining, some drive especially slow like its a snowstorm, as visability decreases the accidents increase...I love the rain myself and the wind, 15-30 mph winds.  James
LindsayP
Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria
2 posted 2007-10-04 12:22 PM



Ida over here in Australia we are having the worst drought on record and the mere mention of rain fills our minds with hope.
Please never hate the rain, it's the most important of God's gifts, without it all life would cease, but I did enjoy your poem.

Lindsay

latearrival
Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499
Florida
3 posted 2007-10-04 01:01 AM


I love rain too, but not while driving.It really pours and when it comes down in a slant right into your windshield, it really cuts your vision. Drivers here do not like to slow down either. Loved the poem" late"
Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
4 posted 2007-10-04 11:44 AM


Yeppers! I love rain too!

And yes, rain can also be a pain!

Sending an umbrella your way!

Linda

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
5 posted 2007-10-04 12:19 PM


I love rain too ... but no doubt there are some restrictions in this love!

You said it well and with wit!

Love,
Margherita

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
6 posted 2007-10-06 01:50 AM


Enjoyed your poem, Ida.  I love the rain too - in fact, passionately, but am afraid of it (and high winds) at night now, as burglars here take advantage of it - the sound of it masks the slightest noise they make.  However, I am trying hard to get over my fears, but just as I get far with that, something happens to set me back a pace or two!

- Owl

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
7 posted 2007-10-06 03:16 AM


Thank You, Owl. Gee, that sounds scary, Do you mean burglars are a constant threat?
                                 Ida

Abena Williams
Junior Member
since 2007-10-08
Posts 25
England
8 posted 2007-10-08 09:50 AM


Hello,

A lovely little verse, which made me smile at the same time as hearing my princess cat meowing to go out in the rain - she'll change her tune when I open the door!

Thank you,

Abena.


Ethan Halo
Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793
on the roof again
9 posted 2007-10-08 10:12 AM


thoroughly enjoyable. thanks for my first smile this morning.
Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
10 posted 2007-10-08 11:40 AM


Yes, Rain is very nice

i love the rain on a quiet evening

ARCTIC WIND

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
11 posted 2007-10-08 11:43 AM


Thank you all for your lovely comments and I really do love rain but a little complaining helps you live longer.
                                 Ida

jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
12 posted 2007-10-08 07:58 PM


Very well done, my friend....I too love the rain...and so does my son who recently moved to Riverside Calif and say's he turns the shower on just so he can hear water falling...

jwesley

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
13 posted 2007-10-08 11:27 PM


Thank you jwesley,
   I know what you mean. I live in So. EL Monte Ca. Which is not that far from Riverside. But when it rains, It rains and homes slide down the hills. Flash floods etc.

jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
14 posted 2007-10-09 11:19 PM


Yeah, know the area well - or did back in the early/late 60's.  Started out as sailor out of Long Beach after Bootcamp in San Diego, ... then lived in Buena Park, El Monte, Monterey Park and Alhambra and Hunting Park.  Lived at Knotts Berry Farm years before they put up the fences...actaually slept a number of night beneat the wagons....loved the place. Miss it in many ways . . . but just not the world Ileft there, anymore...last 30 or so years has been mostly in Hot, Humid, Houston, Dallas/FortW Worth Texas area....and believe me...the Gulf of Mexico off Galveston is worst than the LaBrae Tarpits compared to the Pacific!!!

j.

Still beautiful though...

jwesley

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