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Open Poetry #41
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vandana
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Member Patricius
since 1999-10-22
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0 posted 2007-10-03 12:02 PM


Let us walk away,
From here,
Let's talk about love,
Where noone is here?
Where love is?
Let us go,
To where we suppose to be,
Let us walk away,
and hold our hands,
Smile back
At those times
We used to be there in time,
Where our love had
good times
And also some times
Life used to be alright
with us,
So come and share this moment,
With this time
Love could stay long for us,
So let us walk away
from them
from all of this,
Let us walk away,
© Copyright 2007 vandana - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2007-10-03 03:10 PM

Nice writing vandana...James
Saunni
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777
West Virginia
2 posted 2007-10-03 07:48 PM

I love this!! Something in it that reminds me of somethings.
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
3 posted 2007-10-07 08:19 AM

Till we are able to hold hands everything is fine, wherever we go or remain.

Enjoyed your poem, dear vandana.

Love,
margherita
Tears-of-Sanity
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since 2007-09-05
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Kingdom Hearts
4 posted 2007-10-07 01:15 PM

That was a nice poem I have just read...

Tears of Sanity~
Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
5 posted 2007-10-07 01:56 PM

"Life used to be alright
with us"

~ and may it be so again!


EA
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