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clawmute
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0 posted 2007-10-03 10:58 AM



LEAVING HOME
By Frank Lee Jennings


Multitudes of them leaving
leaving home but not quite grieving
in different ways but the same
from every color, hue and region
leaving, leaving home in legions

ones and twos and threes and tens
not quite sure when it begins
no one tried to make them stay
though some were sad to see them go
they wouldn’t try to stop them though

for after all that time at home
twas good for them to go and roam
and twirl around and skew off there
while many others sailed and sailed
and mothers all just stood and wailed

so soon they all would come to rest
and make the forest floor a nest
a colored carpet laid each fall
by leafy children of the trees
landing there on bended knees

Then wait beneath the winter snow
hidden there while sharp winds blow
for next years children coming down
coming twirling sailing down
a carpet laid still coming down

KNOWLEDGE IS A DEFENSE AND MONEY IS A DEFENSE, BUT THE EXCELLENCY OF WISDOM IS THAT IT GIVES LIFE TO THEM THAT HAVE IT. I DO NOT WRITE FOR OTHERS, BUT

© Copyright 2007 Frank Lee Jennings - All Rights Reserved
TinaTrivett
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1 posted 2007-10-03 11:33 AM


Wow...this left a huge smile on my face. Fantastic!
A Romantic Heart
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2 posted 2007-10-04 10:19 AM


Cute title,

little leaves falling...

blanketed by the snow,

arising from spring sleep,

to grow....

Fall is my favorite season..beautiful colors





You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2007-10-04 11:41 AM


Frank~
Autumn is my season of choice ... you've written another beauty here~



*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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nakdthoughts
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4 posted 2007-10-04 05:36 PM


It's that time of year again~~ although a bit warmer than usual here.

M

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