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Margherita
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Eternity

0 posted 2007-10-03 06:59 AM



    


***

Ready to mingle with the stars

***


I wear your radiant soul
wrapped all over my skin
and I feel it expanding within,
causing me to quiver softly
in constant hushed vibrations.

Though almost weightless
your presence lifts me into
the passion of cosmic vastness.
Your tunes echo in my mind,
your smile glows in my eyes.

A new depth of perception
makes me aware of what is
all around me your beauty reveals.
My feet lift slightly from the ground
and my hips connect to the dance.

In tender expectation my hands
move over the subtle essence of you
clinging firmly to my contours.
Under the night sky I will carry you
ready to mingle with the stars.
***

[This message has been edited by Margherita (10-04-2007 06:28 PM).]

© Copyright 2007 Margherita Rueger - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
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Posts 13296

1 posted 2007-10-03 08:40 AM


feasting nature...from a voice of wisdom...filled with compassion for love in a boiling good natured shoppe of what brings joy, to our souls....a balance, making sense of it all...feeling your life come together, inside a pure karma...

lovely voice here...enjoyed.

Kahlil
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2 posted 2007-10-03 09:21 AM


This is lovely, Margherita...sensual,
passionate, glowing...many things.
I enjoyed it very much.

OwlSA
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3 posted 2007-10-03 11:01 AM


Beautifully happy and happily beautiful!

- Owl

Marchmadness
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4 posted 2007-10-03 12:27 PM


You have a way with words, Margherita.
                             Ida

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2007-10-03 03:45 PM


Enjoyed...James
Dark Stranger
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West Coast
6 posted 2007-10-03 05:25 PM


ms mar' you make the sky lovely
enjoyed you here

Margherita
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Eternity
7 posted 2007-10-04 10:37 AM


Thank you my dear Poet friends for reading and commenting so kindly.

Love,
Margherita

Misty Lilacs
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8 posted 2007-10-04 05:11 PM


I love this!
Marti

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but where they understand you!
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nakdthoughts
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9 posted 2007-10-04 05:27 PM


your smile glows in my eyes~~

love when that happens
M

Elizabeth Santos
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10 posted 2007-10-04 05:41 PM


yOUR IMAGES MAKE READING A PLEASURE
Liz

Saunni
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11 posted 2007-10-05 11:32 PM


You write so BEAUTIFULLY!! Sauni

Sauni:)
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Earth Angel
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12 posted 2007-10-06 10:47 AM


"I wear your radiant soul
wrapped all over my skin
and I feel it expanding within,
causing me to quiver softly
in constant hushed vibrations."

Margherita,
you continue to amaze me!



Love to you, dear poetess!

Linda

Marge Tindal
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13 posted 2007-10-06 10:58 AM


DearestMargherita~
You KNOW I love it~

Beautiful words sparkling here~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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Artic Wind
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14 posted 2007-10-06 11:48 AM


"radiant soul"

BEAUTIFUL POEM!

love love love love IT IT IT IT IT!

ARCTIC WIND

Margherita
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Eternity
15 posted 2007-10-06 04:45 PM


Thank you girls!
Love,
Margherita

Honeybunch
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16 posted 2007-10-07 12:51 PM


Oh, I thought I had commented on this lovely poem but the plus side is that now I can bump it up.  It is a lovely poem!
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