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EConover
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since 2007-10-01
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0 posted 2007-10-03 04:16 AM



My mind is melting like Ice
Slowly dripping impure waters from the outside in
Instant gratification for my soul yet the slush left is unhappy
The frozen tundra of yearning pride and ego bruised
Once a satisfied paradise is now left unsure
Shaking with the anticipation that is will one say cease to exist
Unclear about what will feel good once all the bad desires are gone
As the puddle grows, what's left woes
We’ve had good times together for all this time
I wonder what it is I hope to find


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Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2007-10-07 08:17 AM


I had read this before and I was impressed, but could not reply at that moment.

We always wonder and answers are there, but we have not yet learned to listen well.

Enjoy life as it is given, it is a gift of Love.

Your soul is untouchable by impurity, I see it as pure divine essence.

All the rest is experience.

Thought provoking work.

Love,
Margherita

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