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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2007-10-02 06:51 AM


To Catch A Tear

There are times
when quiet is all one asks for.
It's in the silence
where energy is created,
where truth rises to the top
and reigns free.

On the other side of night,
the power is all mine,
untitled days
to breathe life into the past,
where a smile catches a tear,
and fears are traded for tomorrow.

And then there is that first touch,
the one that deepens the feel,
leaving the want for more
and the knowledge
that actions...
speak louder than words.~


M


"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

© Copyright 2007 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
secondhanddreampoet
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1 posted 2007-10-02 09:26 AM


a fine, thoughtful, emotive 'write'!

I am particularly fond of:

"There are times
when quiet is all one asks for.
It's in the silence
where energy is created,
where truth rises to the top
and reigns free(!)"

serious applause!!

LeeJ
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2 posted 2007-10-02 10:11 AM


I am craving this more and more...it has become so an essential part of my life...

Hip hip hooray for this poem...
lovely

hugs
Lee J.

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2007-10-02 03:11 PM


Nice...James
Robert Frazier
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4 posted 2007-10-02 04:54 PM


when actions speak louder than words...always!

hugs, Robert

inkedgoddess
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5 posted 2007-10-02 05:32 PM


i love that other side of night too

Kethry
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6 posted 2007-10-02 06:08 PM


Actions do speak louder than words but your words are stronger than the barrell of a cannon and just powerful. I can never have too much of you whereas my actions are too much.

a good commitee can decimate communication.

Paul Wilson
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7 posted 2007-10-02 06:43 PM


Maureen...Great write, flows so smooth. Thanks for sharing...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

SmartChick
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8 posted 2007-10-02 07:42 PM


Indeed, actions do speak louder, than words.
latearrival
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9 posted 2007-10-03 04:38 AM


Enjoyed, We all need a little silence
in out lives so we can refresh and begin again. "late"

vandana
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10 posted 2007-10-03 11:24 AM


nice read
aziza
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11 posted 2007-10-05 01:24 PM


Paul spoke the words that I thought.  I agree with him, M.  This is a keeper.

A

nakdthoughts
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12 posted 2007-10-11 07:15 AM


again I thank you for your kind responses~~

I never know where my thoughts will take me and I appreciate when someone enjoys something I  post.


M

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