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A Beautiful Disaster
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since 2007-01-13
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0 posted 2007-10-01 03:58 PM


I Miss You

Time's taken one more day from me,
But not my pain;
Releasing hope from deep inside,
With tears in my eyes... I meet
Another day,
So filled with loneliness and grief,
I'd never wake
To face my own weakness...enough,
It hurts to love... Each hour I live,
Each breath I take
Is just for you.

Have always been afraid to say -
And now I cry;
I welcome memories, I don't mind
That they remind of those precious days -
Now tears of mine.
You're all my life, my soul's soul,
I know I'll die
If never see you... I can't withstand,
Without your hand, my only hope.
My only love...
I miss you...

© Copyright 2007 April A. - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2007-10-02 06:19 AM


Nice flow of emotions...James
JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
2 posted 2007-10-03 08:28 PM


Very nice read.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.

LindsayP
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since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria
3 posted 2007-10-03 11:23 PM



Don't feel too sad for I'm sure that one day, in the not too distant future the sun will shine again and you will be able to smile. I'll say a prayer for you my friend
and wish you all the best, take care.

LindsayP

A Beautiful Disaster
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since 2007-01-13
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4 posted 2007-10-07 12:36 PM


I know.
Thank you!

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