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Open Poetry #41

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DennisTheMenace
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since 2005-09-04

Posts 240

0 posted 2007-09-30 06:49 PM

To whom do I ask
To be relieved of this task,
So mundane and drab;
The boredom with makes it bad
For I care not
Let it be over and forgot.
To whom will I ask
To be forgiven for this task
Then to beg another try;
Will I have to even cry
Shedding tears helps sometimes
To be forgiven minor crimes

Mr. Omniscient
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since 2006-10-28

Posts 134

1 posted 2007-09-30 06:51 PM

The flow of this poem is astonishing to me. Very well written.

DennisTheMenace
Member

since 2005-09-04

Posts 240

2 posted 2007-09-30 06:54 PM

Thanks, I'm just a simple writer and student doing the best I can

Mr. Omniscient
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since 2006-10-28

Posts 134

3 posted 2007-09-30 06:56 PM

Same here man, same here.

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