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Across The Threshold Of Time
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Across The Threshold Of Time |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States 
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Across The Threshold Of Time By Paul Wilson Bygone era caught in grasp of time between yesterday and today I step across the threshold of time wondering if I should stay Victrola stands in corner covered with layers of dust and grime Wallpaper stained with memories that stood test of time Something pulls me back to the past leaving footprints on dusty floor Faded pictures on bedroom wall greet me as I open the door Cradle stands in corner where yesterdays child did lay Dressing table mirror reflects this child of yesterday Creaking floor echo’s thru my mind each step opening another door in time Wooden horse rocks in the wind as I remember a nursery rhyme Burned out candle still in holder no longer lights the way Memories of days gone by light my path today I turn and walk away from this shrine to my past Fond memories always will remain this visit will not be my last ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ Paul [This message has been edited by Paul Wilson (10-01-2007 04:57 PM).] |
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Mr. Omniscient Member
since 2006-10-28
Posts 134 |
Very nice. Well written and well applauded. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I do relate, very well indeed....I have been going into my past regularly of late, looking for old friends, etc...can be fun, can also be frustrating...particularly when there have been about 4 decades that have passed by. Thanxs for the read... |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Fine nostalgically 'timely' write! Applause!! |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Mr. Omniscient...Thanks very much for taking time to read and reply, and for the applause...Paul Barry...Glad you can relate, hope your journey is a happy and positive one thru your memories. Thanks my friend for the read and reply...Paul secondhanddreampoet...Glad you enjoyed, thanks for the read and reply...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
 Paul, a very fine piece of writing and it conjured up a few memories of my own. I identify with most of your poetry that I have read ~ however, I am moved by it all.  Linda |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Paul isn't it wonderful to have such great memories of all those bygone times, happy memories to keep and cherish. great poem. LindsayP |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Linda...Your reply leaves me blushing. Thank you so much for your angel words...Paul LindsayP...Glad you liked this. Yes memories of bygone days are really nice...Paul |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Hey Paullie! What an appropriate poem for today. With the passing of Sheriff Harry Lee--I'm feeling oddly displaced yet again. And this poem--I touch the screen to you--it's partly why I've had so much difficulty throwing things away--every thing seems to have a story attached to it.  Good to see you lovie.  |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Karen...Thank you for your kind words. I heard about Harry Lee on the news. He was a mainstay of Jefferson Parish and I know many will miss him...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Oh Paul, not today! I am all teary anyway and I feel a nod in my throat reading your deeply touching words. Gladly I do not "live in the past", but when certain memories grab me the melancholy can be unbearable at times. Great job you did. Love, Margherita |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Paul, OMG, it's so good to see you and read you...wonderful poem...thank you |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Margherita...Hopefully your memories will bring a warm feeling and smile to you. Thanks for reading and replying...Paul LeeJ...So glad to hear from you, thanks for your kind words...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Inspiring as always! You have a very unique talent for the written word. Excellent work my friend. JL  Blessed are those who are generous, because they feed the poor. ~Proverbs 22:9 NLT |
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