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moondogz
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since 2007-05-01
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Great White North

0 posted 2007-09-30 11:02 AM



Waves

The empty space
I was trying to fill.

Wasn't satisfied
with this placebo pill.

It's a smorgasbord
with no end in sight.

On two cups of java
I can surf all night.

Ride the wave
'till it breaks on shore.

Then find a new thread
and surf some more.

Round and round
it's an endless dance,

until I wake up
and come out of this trance.


© Copyright 2007 Paul R Breen - All Rights Reserved
DennisTheMenace
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since 2005-09-04
Posts 240

1 posted 2007-09-30 03:04 PM


Are you sleeping or awake? not sure here, but ain't that the case sometimes?  I've had dreams so real I can't tell and daydreams so invovled I'm not sure I am really awake.  What a thin line to define by an active mind.

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2007-09-30 03:12 PM


Been there! Done that! Oh boy, do I ever know what you mean!!!

Well stated!

Excuse me, it's time for my nap! I've been up all night surfing the net! lol

Hugs to you ~ and a cup of java or two!

EA

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
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So. El Monte, California
3 posted 2007-09-30 03:59 PM


Have you noticed tha most poets are insomniacs. I am. Maybe someone should do a study on insomniac poets. Ha Ha
PoppaLoco
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since 2007-09-23
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4 posted 2007-09-30 04:29 PM


Upon my waking, I always feel that placebo, and the emptyness comes back. Sad sad poem to me, appreciated it a lot!
Pops

moondogz
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since 2007-05-01
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Great White North
5 posted 2007-10-01 01:09 AM


Thanks everyone for shining your "LIGHT" on my "Waves."
             moon.

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
6 posted 2007-10-02 03:11 AM


I'm still burning the midnight oil! ~ I think I must have had one too many javas!  


EA

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