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spunkygirl Junior Member
since 2007-09-18
Posts 46 |
Leaves falling red on the ground Wonderful rain makes a beautiful sound day after day and year after year I see Autumn come only to disappear Summer is gone bright sun so true Winter is next no snow for you Spring will see flowers burst anew My passion for you will always be true Our daughter's full grown A young lady now Soon she'll be married We'll be wondering how How did this time pass So quick we will ask It was only yesterday she was a young las Tomorrow will bring a new day at last She'll be giving us grandchildren fast I hope you will be here to join in the fun Little Tommy or Bobby will soon be one Sally is wanting to be on Granddaddy's knee You know in April she just turned three Christmas is coming won't you be here The grandchildren want to pull on granddaddy's beard Tommy or Bobby just graduated Sally's full grown with children of her own It's been a wonderful life You and I have been blessed I thank you for the shared memory Our wonderful treasure of family Leaves falling red on the ground Wonderful rain makes a beautiful sound day after day and year after year I see Autumn come only to disappear Summer is gone bright sun so true Winter is next no snow for you Spring will see flowers burst anew My passion for you will always be true |
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Tears-of-Sanity Member
since 2007-09-05
Posts 121Kingdom Hearts |
Time passes fast.. You got that right  I guess if people stopped wondering how they do pass and made something out of it, then we will be at peace,a nd pass on with no regrets. I like the seasons, the way you talked about them passing for eternity. Autumn is my favourite... Nice writing.. Thank you! Tears of Sanity~ |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
beautiful write! this was just lovely really...felt as though I could see the seasons passing with the time. Take care, Amy "Life is not measured by the breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away" |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
sweet and meloncholy just how i like them |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
enjoyed the way you wrote this...I have on several occasions, turned life into seasons, spring/birth...summer/heat of passion, Fall/ life's middle ages winter/the elderly years that we live our remaining years through. |
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spunkygirl Junior Member
since 2007-09-18
Posts 46 |
Tears, Aimster, Inked, James and Magnus, You all have made me feel so very welcome here, Thank you for the read and I'm glad you enjoyed! |
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