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secondhanddreampoet
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a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2007-09-29 11:16 PM



A ‘poet’ is…

the ocean in a mirage…
the ‘voice’ of a snowflake in a blizzard…
the moon’s quicksilver image in a lake…
the spectral shadow in a broken mirror…

a raindrop that longs to move a mountain…
a  glimpse of eternity spinning in a moment…
a comet-rider in the cosmic void…
a dream-drifter dancing boldly to oblivion!...


© Copyright 2007 Bruce E. Adams Jr. - All Rights Reserved
Marchmadness
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1 posted 2007-09-30 12:35 PM


Wonderful description of a poet, Secondhandreampoet.
                        Ida

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2 posted 2007-09-30 02:25 AM


amazing as always...
I am glad to read your poem..
It is really nice

Tears of Sanity~

OwlSA
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3 posted 2007-09-30 02:58 AM


You know, Bruce, I hesitate to say (but am thinking it) that this is my most favourite of your poems that I have read to date.  The reason that I hesitate, is that I seem either to be saying it or just thinking it of so many of the poets that I have been reading lately.  I don't know whether everyone is simultaneously getting even better than they were, or whether I am just "high" on being back home at PIP again, but either way, this is really a perfect gem!

- Owl

Elizabeth Santos
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4 posted 2007-09-30 04:52 AM


No one could have done it better
Great poem
LIz

Magnus
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5 posted 2007-09-30 09:20 AM


Looks like the votes are in....

Well done Sir.

PoppaLoco
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6 posted 2007-09-30 05:03 PM


Normally, I shun repetition and listing, but you apply it flawlessly. As usual, extremely well put!
Pops

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2007-09-30 05:18 PM


Fine writing...James
ArtSolstice
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8 posted 2007-09-30 08:06 PM


Flawless.

My favorite line:
"a  glimpse of eternity spinning in a moment…"

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9 posted 2007-09-30 08:11 PM


I look forward to listening to snowflakes...
(but not blizzards)

Earth Angel
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10 posted 2007-09-30 09:10 PM


...about a poet, by a POET!

To quote said POET (YOU),

"v. serious, long-sustained applause!!"

Bruce, this truly is one of my favourite descriptions on being a poet.



Love & Poet Light,

Linda

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11 posted 2007-10-01 06:27 AM


how right you are, the visuals are striking
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