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Mr. Omniscient Member
since 2006-10-28
Posts 134 |
ZYX I opened the door to first period and down I fell. As I fell I gazed above, Like I was staring up high At a bypassing dove. Finally, I landed on a soft surface That clutched me like a glove, It was a beautiful cushion that was knitted with love. I would have saw her even if I were blind, She’s beautifully designed, She’s blissfully defined. God is too kind. In any situation she’s one of my factors, She’s always first to come to mind, That’s why my ABC’s are backwards… I’ll treat you right I assure you. You’re face is too sweet I have to adore you. (Her name is Zee) [This message has been edited by Mr. Omniscient (09-29-2007 09:36 PM).] |
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PoppaLoco Member
since 2007-09-23
Posts 83EU, NL, Limburg |
AWWWWWWW!! For a topic so abused and generally over-done, I found your sweet words very well put. The innocense is disarming, the playfulness is cute, and if there is any cheesyness then it hasn't bothered me. Pops |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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crusherdestroyer New Member
since 2007-08-20
Posts 8Indiana, USA |
very clever. nice. and thanks for the comment, i wasnt too sure about that one. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your love-struck poem was adorable from A to Zee!  Be happy!  EA |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Cute poem. It's great to be young and love struck. |
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Mr. Omniscient Member
since 2006-10-28
Posts 134 |
Thank you all very much. |
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