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OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
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Durban, South Africa

0 posted 2007-09-29 03:13 AM


SANCTION
27 September 2007

In heavy grey
a silly tantalizing tune
makes the shoulders twitch
and the fingers click
and sad energy
diffuses
into the spectre of a smile.

- Owl

[This message has been edited by OwlSA (09-30-2007 03:41 AM).]

© Copyright 2007 Diana van den Berg - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

1 posted 2007-09-29 03:28 AM


Are you listening to Grand Funk Railroad too?

dayum



alright

now

Uncle John's Farm (I am a bit eclectic)

and yes

you painted a smile on me...

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
2 posted 2007-09-29 03:41 AM


Actually, it was an ad jingle!  LOL

Glad it made you smile.  Thanks for the email.  Have replied.

- Owl

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
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a 'Universalist' !
3 posted 2007-09-29 09:04 AM


brief, emotive, powerful!...a fine 'write'!

serious applause!!

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
4 posted 2007-09-29 09:37 AM


Alluvial quality to this write.
Enjoyed.
TD

OwlSA
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since 2005-11-07
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Durban, South Africa
5 posted 2007-09-29 10:15 AM


Thank you Bruce and This Diamond.  I appreciate enjoyment of it and your kind comments.  

- Owl

The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
6 posted 2007-09-29 11:44 PM



your muse is working you overtime Diana

I love this...

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
7 posted 2007-09-30 02:35 AM


Thank you Kate.  Yes, after not having written anything for a while, several poems in the last few days have insisted on being born, LOL!

- Owl

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