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etard
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since 2007-09-28
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0 posted 2007-09-28 09:52 PM


I live on the beach,
Waikiki shores to be exact.
I have no money.
I have no job.
I use a cart to hold my trash.
I eat out of resturant bins.
People look at me like i'm a sin,
When all along i'm just like them.
I am a bum,
A hobo to be certain.
I have no life.
I have no future.
However, the ironic thing is...
This bum has Paradise.
I live in a Paradise people only dream of.
I live in a world people wish to see.
I suppose this hobo is quite a lucky bum.
For no one has the chance to live in Hawaii, soak up the sun like this lucky sonofagun.

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Gaia
1 posted 2007-09-28 10:42 PM


you are a lucky bum
Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
2 posted 2007-09-28 10:59 PM


I agree, Maybe you would like to raed my poem "The Mountain Man."
                               Ida

PoppaLoco
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since 2007-09-23
Posts 83
EU, NL, Limburg
3 posted 2007-09-29 10:21 PM


Sometimes, the easiest road to happiness is leaving your posessions behind. Not my road, but it does leave you a lot of leisure time hahah.
Lovely write
Pops

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