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Open Poetry #41

Summer

BrainMop
New Member

since 2007-09-28

Posts 4

0 posted 2007-09-28 06:41 PM

At night the
street lights
yawned yellow
at all of us.
We were just kids
gawky and fresh.
With bent noses and feathers
ruffled from the
freefall
of adolesence.
We were the masters
of silent film as
we starred at the
pavement
with our hands in our
pockets
tip tapping the curb
with our toes,
waiting
to tell her
goodnight.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2007-09-28 06:49 PM

Welcome to Passions.
This is a great first post.

Check starred...might be stared, in how I read it. Excellent write.

BrainMop
New Member

since 2007-09-28

Posts 4

2 posted 2007-09-28 07:48 PM

Thanks. just getting my feet wet. I appreciate the read and post.

moondogz
Member

since 2007-05-01

Posts 397
Great White North

3 posted 2007-09-28 09:54 PM

Thanks for the "read" BrainMop, very well done. Nice flashback (for me anyway) to a simpler time and place.

moon.

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

4 posted 2007-09-28 11:06 PM

Hi Brainmop,
If this is just getting your feet wet, I can't wait for you to jump in.
Ida

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