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James McInerney
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since 2003-09-27
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0 posted 2007-09-28 06:03 PM


Dearly departed

Your love will save me in the end,
Three simple words will on my life depend,
I’ll tell you when with a final kiss,
The taste of your tears will never leave my lips.
And when the sky is no more,
And my breath doesn’t hold,
Don’t cry for me,
Don’t bury your soul,
For in your arms, my love for you hasn’t died,
It has just begun,
Through you, I will have survived…

© Copyright 2007 James McInerney - All Rights Reserved
Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
1 posted 2007-09-28 06:07 PM


WOW...this poem...WOW is all I can say! This kind of love is true and special--hold onto it. When we depart from this Earth, and leave our loved ones behind...to know we were loved and loved like this is what life is all about or at least should be.

Great emotion, beautiful pen!

Take care,

Amy

"Life is not measured by the breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away"

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2007-09-29 04:53 AM


Enjoyed...James
A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
3 posted 2007-09-29 05:36 PM


Don’t bury your soul,
For in your arms, my love for you hasn’t died,

these lines speak to me, very powerful and moving!

~ARH

You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss

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