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Open Poetry #41

Craving Dream

PoppaLoco
Member

since 2007-09-23

Posts 83
EU, NL, Limburg

0 posted 2007-09-28 11:16 AM

A slight caress, not by hands
but merely a breath to take me down
to a scene far too divine.
As hands meet and eyes get lost
not even surprise,
I’d been expecting you tonight

The moment of truth comes,
just as I’d imagined
carried by shadows
but my suspicion sleeps
as I’m just waiting for your--

Touch:
But chaos enters
in feeling the cries of joy
with carefully shut eyes
I hear them waver, as shadows climb up.
Climax loses to panic and suspicion
as the dark pulls her face away,
my lips missing, kissing It instead,
what reveals itself but cold night air

when lonely eyes open from a lover’s dream

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2007-09-28 03:04 PM

Wonderful imagery.

WindWalker
Senior Member

since 2001-10-12

Posts 1218

2 posted 2007-10-03 07:18 PM

Yes, the imagery in this fine write is Wonderful!!!!!!!!

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