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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2007-09-28 06:52 AM


you were clever with your hands
undoing the already done buttons
and breaking the locks

entering under water
without making breathing sounds
at the edge of my conscious

your hands were cool on my skin
as you stepped into a dream
and let your hair water my mouth

before I knew I was thirsty enough
to want to become famished
for the satiation of your liquor

while you wore only secrets of my ink


__________

daark

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aziza
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
1 posted 2007-09-28 04:26 PM


Silently Lovely.

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2007-09-28 05:08 PM


humble thanks ms az
The Lady
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3 posted 2007-09-29 11:13 PM



how moving
are the secrets of your ink
stranger darlin'


inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
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4 posted 2007-09-30 06:16 PM


i always love
you best
when you slip it in
before i knew what happened

o so smoothhhhhhhhhhhh

Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2007-10-01 06:25 AM


ladyone, thank you hon for touching me


____________

ms inky, it is a pleasure to wear you
as you bathe in my words, thank you

Gentle Spirit
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6 posted 2007-10-02 06:11 AM


mmm yes, lovely secrets Darkdaddy...  
Dark Stranger
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7 posted 2007-10-02 06:19 AM


thank you donna, always a pleasure to have your eyes
Margherita
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8 posted 2007-10-02 01:41 PM


quote:
entering under water
without making breathing sounds
at the edge of my conscious



I don't know why, but in this very moment I hear a whale's song, a tune that can't be forgotten.

It matches the powerful impact of this "sinmind moan".

Sigh.

Love,
Margherita

Dark Stranger
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9 posted 2007-10-03 06:42 AM


ms mar, thank you for listening, stay close and listen longer please
aziza
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
10 posted 2007-10-05 01:29 PM


Reads even more beautifully the next go-around.

A

Dark Stranger
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11 posted 2007-10-05 03:39 PM


each time your eyes come here
I wear them with humble thanks

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