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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2007-09-27 06:39 AM


Marcia

Thinking of you
and times that are missed,
years of ago when couldn't resist
the meeting of words
seen through look in the eyes.
Thinking of you
brings heart-breaths of sighs.

Remembering times
in morning's review,
on the brink of tomorrow when feeling blue,
repeating to self to quiet the mind.
Remembering times
when your hand I would find.

Lost in this maze
with no end to foresee
a "circle of seasons" readying for me,
viewing the past and the future's "might be".
Lost in this maze
waiting tirelessly.

Moment to moment
thoughts rise with each sigh,
clinging to memories bringing tears to the eye.
Tomorrow's of yesterday, once shared by your touch
leaves each moment to moment
in missing you much.

M
(thinking of you~~missing you)

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
1 posted 2007-09-27 07:45 AM


Hugs,
You convey these emotions, moment to moment, so very well.  Hard to fill that hollow spot, where once warmed by a loved one.
Have a good day

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
2 posted 2007-09-27 08:59 AM


So very poignant, dear Maureen. Beautifully rendered pain and longing.

Love and hugs.
Margherita

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2007-09-27 05:31 PM


Nice writing...James
JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
4 posted 2007-09-27 06:04 PM


So nice.

JL

Blessed are those who are generous, because they feed the poor.
~Proverbs 22:9 NLT

Robert Frazier
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since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014

5 posted 2007-09-27 06:16 PM


as sweet and beautiful as it is longingly sad

Hugs, Robert

Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
6 posted 2007-09-27 06:46 PM


Feeling this deep in my heart--to the core. Very nice write lady!

"Life is not measured by the breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away"

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07
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a 'Universalist' !
7 posted 2007-09-27 06:59 PM


obviously, a most heartfelt and emotive 'write'!

applause!!

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
8 posted 2007-09-28 06:44 AM


Thank you. Missing my sister, someone whom I could always discuss "things" with.

M

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