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Rick
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia

0 posted 2007-09-27 05:57 AM

Not forged in steel or iron set
The wander way that mind may go
So free to dream or just forget
The many thoughts that moment’s sow

In sweet adventure, soul’s retreat
Or land of drought that shows no spring
All passing thoughts; though some repeat
Fate and time do moments bring

Attuned to waves that float and call
Notes which sing or scream my name
Hearing one and hearing all
Melding sounds that sound the same

Wake is time, fulfillment find
Uncover eyes and feel the day
A magnet is the open mind
And all the answers come its way

And visit comes each thought as one
And of we chat to find the way
Finding peace, confused by none
In field of flowers play

So let the thoughts and voices come
One by one contend their plea
Then the play and game is fun
And in yourself you’re free

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2007-09-27 05:32 PM

Nice writing...James

PoppaLoco
Member

since 2007-09-23

Posts 83
EU, NL, Limburg

2 posted 2007-09-27 06:10 PM

Beautiful thoughts, and a lovely poem to sit over and do just like you say, let the words and thoughts roll over.
Pops

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

3 posted 2007-09-27 06:11 PM

Nice.

JL

Blessed are those who are generous, because they feed the poor.
~Proverbs 22:9 NLT

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

4 posted 2007-09-27 09:05 PM

Just another wonderful poem Rick written in your usual high standard, great write.

Lindsay

Rick
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia

5 posted 2007-09-28 03:18 AM

Hi James, thanks for the reply my friend, very much appreciated.

Pops, great to have you visit, thank you for your time and comment my friend, it was great.

JL, nice to get your reply, thanks for the time and comment.

Hi Lindsay, great to see you here again mate, hope you are well, thanks for your wonderful reply yet again, take care and catch up soon.

To you all my friends, again thank you so much for your visit and time, enjoy seeing you all here. Thank you.

Rick

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

6 posted 2007-09-30 10:52 AM

Yet another well thought out, conceived and
given to us the readers...that we might enjoy
it as well.

Rick
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia

7 posted 2007-10-06 12:22 PM

Hi Magnus, great to get your reply my friend, thank you for your time and comment.

Rick

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