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ameteurpoet101
Junior Member

since 2007-09-24

Posts 18
The island of sunshine, Jamaica

0 posted 2007-09-26 03:24 PM

Where is love when all we do is fuss and fight
Where is love if i can't sleep without you at night
Where is love when i depend on your every touch
Where is love if you hurt me so much
where is love when there is another girl

Where is love when you have ruined our world
Where is love when you lie constantly
where is love if we couldn't even be
Where is love when you broke my heart
Where is love was there none from the start

Where is in a world so cold
where is love when you're not there to hold
Where is love, did i dream it all
where is love you didnt catch me when i fall

Where was love when you through it all away
where was love if i could'nt make you stay
Where was love when you turned your back on me
Where was love when she was all you see

Where was love when i cried myslef to sleep
Where was love when the memories made me weep
where was love i dont believe in it anymore
where was love if i'm not even sure

Where is love was it just an illusion a flicker of insanity a hepless intrusion
Where is love........?

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2007-09-26 03:56 PM

I suppose one could say, if this is love who needs it...but its not. The question is, is this the kind of relationship you want?...james

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

2 posted 2007-09-26 10:00 PM

Where is love? Obviously not there, maybe you should go find it.
Ida

EagleScorpion
Senior Member

since 2000-03-08

Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever

3 posted 2007-09-29 02:03 PM

this belongs in a collection of the greatest poems ever written. it's message is so meaningful and relevant.. as too many realitonships nowadays go sour because people cant be truthful. i love it so much and look forward to reading more of your work. thanks for replying to mine, btw, and a heartfelt WELCOME to passions!

There are many great people in the world, but real people are one in a million.

Ethan Halo
Senior Member

since 2000-04-28

Posts 793
on the roof again

4 posted 2007-09-29 08:25 PM

i believe you answer your own question:

"Where is love when you broke my heart
Where is love was there none from the start"

not a bad entrance at all. welcome to pip. i hope by sharing your poetry here, you can connect to some genuine love inside yourself and forge some better relationships that start with some love.

that way you don't have to waste time wondering where it went.

The soul is oftentimes a battlefield where reason and judgement wage war on passion and appetite.

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

5 posted 2007-10-01 02:45 PM

Horray! Welcome to Passions! Enjoyed your first write--doesn't sound like love to me. You can do better! Keep your chin up and SMILE!

Take care,

Amy

"Life is not measured by the breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away"

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