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HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2007-09-26 10:50 AM




Reality Repeats Itself

With sadness I write
Whilst melancholy blue
The sad songs echo
I wondered if you knew

Sorrow still prevailed
In the depths of despair
I tried reaching you
Still it gets me nowhere

I languish in anguish
When feeling torn apart
As silence pervades
On a tear stained heart

Colours of my mood
Deep depressingly blue
Reality repeats itself
In tears I cried over you


HopeĀ©2007

With music and graphic below http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/105/poem_91004697.html

© Copyright 2007 HopeS - All Rights Reserved
JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
1 posted 2007-09-26 12:07 PM


This is very deeply felt, but the presentation on the web page with the art and music is spectacular.  Great write HopeS.

JL

Blessed are those who are generous, because they feed the poor.
~Proverbs 22:9 NLT

LindsayP
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since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria
2 posted 2007-09-27 12:48 PM



To another Aussie, Hope I loved your poem,

Sad but enjoyed.

LindsayP

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