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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2007-09-26 06:40 AM


it was the new car smell
of an afternoon without hubcaps
perfume flavored thickness
like skin with memory

my hands wanted your eyes
to make circles with my fingers
and ask you politely to view
into mine as if they were the only

and being that close to your lips
I knew my arms would want to
pretend you were sponge love
full of something drinkable

that needed to be crushed gentle
til both of our shirts were ruined
with aged in wrinkle patterns
that would never come out

unless we rode the evening bare back


__________

daark

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1 posted 2007-09-26 09:28 AM


LOVE this D such a sweet want in this...
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2 posted 2007-09-26 04:37 PM


*smiles*  

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that needed to be crushed gentle
til both of our shirts were ruined
with aged in wrinkle patterns
that would never come out
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them hugs will do it to ya every time heh darkbuddie?     Love the way your thoughts tiptoe about in my mind...

Dark Stranger
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3 posted 2007-09-26 05:51 PM


ms suesea, thank you babe

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ms donna, thanks lady friend

Margherita
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4 posted 2007-09-27 10:16 AM


quote:
my hands wanted your eyes
to make circles with my fingers
and ask you politely to view
into mine as if they were the only



do you realize how achingly beautiful and poignant this is?

Love,
Margherita

Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2007-09-27 05:26 PM


ms mar' thank you for wearing it close to your skin
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6 posted 2007-10-03 09:24 PM


You bring to life again
tangent songs
of some other life...

and in this one, it is
most definitely
Roy Orbison...

and what his dark glasses
could see...


Dark Stranger
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7 posted 2007-10-04 06:34 AM


ms sun..thank you ladyfriend...he is one of my favorites.
secondhanddreampoet
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a 'Universalist' !
8 posted 2007-10-04 08:04 PM


a most fine and interesting 'write'!

serious applause!!

Dark Stranger
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9 posted 2007-10-05 06:30 AM


second's thank you for the touch
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
10 posted 2007-10-05 12:32 PM


You leave me wanting to read more - as if I only got a taste of something delicious on my mind.

A

Dark Stranger
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11 posted 2007-10-05 03:40 PM


must be something in the oatmeal little one...but I do enjoy you when you are hungry, thanks babe
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