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EagleScorpion
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since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever

0 posted 2007-09-26 01:18 AM



If my thoughts could speak
I would never stop speaking
And scream at the top of my lungs

If my heart could sing
To the rhythm of it’s beat
I would know what it truly means to love

If these eyes could see
The colors unseen
Maybe I’d see the light above

If these ears could hear
In melodies clear
I would know exactly who I was



© Copyright 2007 Joseph Alexander Knob - All Rights Reserved
ameteurpoet101
Junior Member
since 2007-09-24
Posts 18
The island of sunshine, Jamaica
1 posted 2007-09-26 03:43 PM


i'm really new at actually showing people my poems expect my family ofcourse its kinda scary too waiting to know what people think about it.... i like it~
EagleScorpion
Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever
2 posted 2007-09-29 02:18 PM


you are awesome. put some more of your stuff on! dont be shy! this is the perfect place for you to do it
Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
3 posted 2007-10-02 01:33 PM


Well, you know the instruments and you are able to use them, to refine the listening ...
so you will know.

Deep thoughts, beautifully rendered.

Love,
Margherita

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