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Star Dancing
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Star Dancing |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia 
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We are star dancing sky clad in the night a wondrous expression of purest delight and powerful magics are made at the sight of people star dancing and bathed in moonlight. Beside fire burning with sparks rising high the people are dancing, arms raised to sky filled with the glory of days long gone by releasing the magic and sending it high. The people are dreaming a vision in song the wind takes the music and wafts it along and here in the darkness the magic grows strong while dancers are whirling - awakening spring’s song. A chant begins softly - becomes a great roar the people are gasping they know what’s in store entwined now and warming the tussocky floor we move to the music still aching for more. Till spent and heart rent with our eyes all-ablaze we watch for the dawning sign - glittering haze and wait for the coming - the ancient of days, the star of the evening will claim all our praise. We dance all around now sky clad in the day and he dances with us to take us away from this place of sorrow, where nature is grey to a place of his making to bow down his way. The whisper of music still hangs in the breeze and passes along, all the leaves of the trees the moon smiles softly – she bought us release sky clad in our dancing unlocks magic’s keys. a good commitee can decimate communication. |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Kethry, you have writen a lovely poem, great rhyming, really enjoyed it LindsayP |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Oh, Kethry, I absolutely love this magical poem. You must be a celtic woman. Ida |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Oh, Kethry, I absolutely love this magical poem. You must be a Celtic woman. Ida |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
You make me think of one of my favorite books... by Spider and Jeanne Robinson. *S* I like this very much! *S* |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OhKethry~ You literally make the stars shine with this brilliant write~ Brava, my dear lady~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Kethry You are a magic weaver. This is tapestry of beauty. Alison |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Magical  Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Always enjoy reading your work, my friend and this ones no different... j. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
This is glorious. Seriously. You stay with the scene all the way through and amp it up as you go. Sky-clad. Around here maybe we'd be sky-clad but anyone with sense would be wearing their boots. And wouldn't that be a peculiar sight?Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful Kethry...James |
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