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CastleGuard
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0 posted 2007-09-25 11:02 AM




we danced
and I thought the world
had burst iridescent -
it was but my heart
blazing within you


CG

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TinaTrivett
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1 posted 2007-09-25 04:54 PM


short but brilliant..
secondhanddreampoet
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a 'Universalist' !
2 posted 2007-09-25 06:11 PM


brief and fine!

applause!!

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
3 posted 2007-09-25 06:37 PM


loved it~~
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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
4 posted 2007-09-26 11:58 PM


Just don't step on my toes..LOL

~ARH

You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss

LindsayP
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5 posted 2007-09-27 12:09 PM



Short but sweet, tells a story

LindsayP

CastleGuard
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6 posted 2007-09-27 06:56 PM



Thank you everyone for the kind replies...

ARH - now that would be a virtual impossibility...LOL

A Romantic Heart
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7 posted 2007-09-29 05:50 PM


virtual yes, reality no...LOL!

~ARH

You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss

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