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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2007-09-24 07:45 PM


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Listen to her
Prattle on

As if one in this game
Has much of a choice
In the matter

I think I’m too old
For this dating thing
I’ve been drafted in
By being single
And merely here

Still I suppose
That under her clothes
There are the remains
Of certain advantages

And the weekend is long
And we’re all easily bored
And I’ve nothing
Better to do


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© Copyright 2007 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
Marchmadness
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1 posted 2007-09-25 01:17 AM


Wow! Huan Yi,
We all get old (male and female) but for some reason only women are criticized for being rude enough to age. Perhaps as she was prattling, she was wondering what was under your clothes.


JamesMichael
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2 posted 2007-09-25 04:56 AM


Oh, oh, seems like you broke one of the rules...something about never telling a woman shes old or fat, or something like that.  
Of course, you didn't tell her, you only thought it...so you're all right, but then again you wrote about it, so you may not be allright...just joking around...I hope women realize that men don't like being told these things either...James

Huan Yi
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3 posted 2007-09-25 01:53 PM




Thanks Both


This is not an actual event; few
of my things are historical.  I took
a subject gave it a mood to see
who or what happens.

I don't write personals.

Thanks again


John

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4 posted 2007-09-25 02:22 PM


My apologies, John.
               Ida

PoppaLoco
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5 posted 2007-09-25 06:14 PM


I'm not sure that's a theme of old age only, but very well pictured. So much meaning in so simple a scene.
Pops

Huan Yi
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6 posted 2007-09-25 07:08 PM



Pops,

Thanks

And you're right

John

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