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Aimster
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Charlotte, NC

0 posted 2007-09-24 03:44 PM


"I'm sorry"
Those words sound even hollow to me
How does one erase a lifetime of pain?
I hope you are now somehow free

All these years and I never knew
The pieces of the puzzle now fit
The story finally makes sense
Feeling it in my gut, like I was the one hit

It was all for nothing
Wasteful, and it did not need to be
The image looking back in the mirror
Parts of you I truly see in me

I'm not even able to fathom
What each day must have been like for you
Never knowing if you'd wake to tomorrow
Paints a whole new shade of blue


If given the chance
What could I possibly say?
You gave me a better life
In the end you had to pay

A debt so high
No mother should have to decide
Between her child
Or her own life

You chose me, one cold April day
Now I live a life of luxury
While you are buried without even a stone
Words do hurt, they do break bones

Today I give to you
A gift from high above
I give you my heart
The gift of love


"Life is not measured by the breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away"

To my Mom Becky. May you rest in forever peace. You are finally free!

© Copyright 2007 Amy Kennedy - All Rights Reserved
Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16
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Realm of Supernatural
1 posted 2007-09-24 03:45 PM


VERY TOUCHING

love it


ARCTIC WIND

[This message has been edited by Artic Wind (09-24-2007 10:04 PM).]

PoppaLoco
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since 2007-09-23
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EU, NL, Limburg
2 posted 2007-09-24 07:18 PM


Amazing how you manage bring up both the deepest despair and the most fragile hope in one poem, or the several poems I've seen from you.

Admiring your strength,
Pops

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
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So. El Monte, California
3 posted 2007-09-24 09:39 PM


What a lovely tribute to your mother.          
                      Ida

Earth Angel
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4 posted 2007-09-24 11:19 PM


Oh, Amy. You expressed your feelings very well. I know that your Mom knows all the mixed emotions that you have experienced ~ and that you love her still.

"Today I give to you
A gift from high above
I give you my heart
The gift of love"

~ A gift beyond measure.

Loving hug,

Linda

LindsayP
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since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria
5 posted 2007-09-25 01:12 AM



Lovely words Aimster, written with love,

And I'm sure Mom will love it.

Lindsay

Aimster
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Charlotte, NC
6 posted 2007-09-25 07:40 PM


Thanks for your beautiful heartfelt replies! I hope that my Mom likes this...suppose she is reading it from heaven.

Amy

"Life is not measured by the breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away"

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