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Open Poetry #41

A Dangerous Thing

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

0 posted 2007-09-23 04:43 PM

My thoughts are as deep
As the core of the world,
Bold and multi-colored,
A banner unfurled,
On the gray and dismal battlefield
Of conventional thought
And banal dreams.
Are there words
That will never reach my lips?
For fear they'll be misunderstood.
Probably,
But we will see.
For history has proven to peasant and king
That unconventional thought is a dangerous thing.

Ida Werrett

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

1 posted 2007-09-23 04:46 PM

My thoughts are as deep
As the core of the world

beautiful sentence, beautiful poem

ARCTIC WIND

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

2 posted 2007-09-23 04:54 PM

Thank you, Arctic Wind,
It is always nice to get positive comments from other poets especially one with so much talent.

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