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Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural

0 posted 2007-09-23 01:08 PM



Wonder Land

As I lay myself down to sleep
The sandman sprinkles some sleeping sand
So I will fall asleep
And drift off to wonder land

A dream world, full of magical places
Valleys, forests, and a big castle
Full of flowers and hearts
And the water is clear like a crystal

Chocolate ponds and candy-canes
And Cotton candy trees
There is a lake full honey
And islands floating on top of cookies

Fields full of yummy fruits
With raspberries, and blue berries
A waterfall full of fruits delight
With mangos, and a swirl of cherries

I never want this dream to end
It fell with the last of the sleeping sand
Farewell, you will be missed
I will come back one day, to my wonder land

© Copyright 2007 Arctic Wind - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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1 posted 2007-09-23 04:54 PM


Sometimes we need to go to a wonderland to relax our body and souls...James
Artic Wind
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2 posted 2007-09-23 04:58 PM


James Michael-

that so true, we need to, and thats why I have created the portal of the wonderland
thank you

ARCTIC WIND

Marchmadness
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3 posted 2007-09-23 05:04 PM


That's what is good about having a poetic soul. We all have a wonderland to escape to
and share with others.
                                

Kethry
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Victoria Australia
4 posted 2007-09-23 05:09 PM


This is wonderful portal you have created, however my dietician would be horrified if I went there as I would probably put on pounds just dreaming about this land. Good imagination, good job.

a good commitee can decimate communication.

Artic Wind
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5 posted 2007-09-23 05:43 PM




marchmadness                        

Thank you!    

I love to write and i really enjoy writting about

somewhere, where people can relax                                        

ARCTIC WIND


[This message has been edited by Artic Wind (09-23-2007 06:59 PM).]

Artic Wind
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6 posted 2007-09-23 05:49 PM


kethry

Thank you, and dont worry, the candy is 100%

healthy lol  

ARCTIC WIND

[This message has been edited by Artic Wind (09-23-2007 06:58 PM).]

DennisTheMenace
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7 posted 2007-09-23 05:54 PM


good write, I enjoy traveling without having to go anywhere. (My girl says I'm just a lazy daydreamer, but thats why she loves me I think)

Artic Wind
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8 posted 2007-09-23 06:57 PM


DennisTheMenace-

Thank you, i am happy people wish they could drift of the wonderland =, well you can, just believe

ARCTIC WIND

Earth Angel
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9 posted 2007-09-24 12:15 PM


Hi, Arctic Wind ~ I would never want to wake up from a delectable dream like that, either!

I liked your use of the pink font. It looks and "smells" like cotton candy!

Your dream land truly is a "Wonder Land".

Marshmallow hugs and candy cane kisses,

EA

Artic Wind
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10 posted 2007-09-24 12:17 PM


Earth Angel-

thank you very much!

i enjoy writting about places such as this one.

bubble gum Hug! lol

ARCTIC WIND

HopeS
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11 posted 2007-09-24 02:25 PM


Such a dreamy fantasy flight , this was a delicious delight


Hope

Artic Wind
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12 posted 2007-09-24 02:31 PM


HopeS

candy and fruits
more than you can chew
come on down, the gateway is open
wonderland awaits you

ARCTIC WIND

ameteurpoet101
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The island of sunshine, Jamaica
13 posted 2007-09-24 04:29 PM


I wish i cud go there right now.....ahhhhh so magical~
Artic Wind
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14 posted 2007-09-24 04:31 PM


ameteur-

thank you!

oh, you could, just believe lol

Thanks

ARCTIC WIND

Earth Angel
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15 posted 2007-09-25 02:03 AM


Giving you a Hershey's chocolate kiss for that bubblegum hug!

Marshmallow hug,
EA

Margherita
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16 posted 2007-09-25 10:06 AM


Ok I will take a bath (!) in the chocolate pond first and after that in the crystalline waters ...

This is so pleasant and makes me smile.

A deliciously sweet write.

Love,
Margherita

Artic Wind
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17 posted 2007-09-25 03:23 PM


Earth angel


Thank you that was so SWEET!
lol

ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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18 posted 2007-09-25 03:24 PM


Margherita-

thank you, I am so happy you enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

Tears-of-Sanity
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Kingdom Hearts
19 posted 2007-09-27 09:18 AM


That was so sweet...
As I close my eyes and I magine my own wonderland... it is somehow different, but the purpose and feeling is the same

Thank you for the trip and hope to read from you again.

Tears of Sanity~

Artic Wind
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20 posted 2007-09-27 03:05 PM


Tears of sainty

thanks,

why dont you go to the fairy meadow (my first poem)

candy awaits

ARCTIC WIND

effjayel
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since 2007-09-30
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At the Crossroads of Infinity
21 posted 2007-09-30 12:49 PM


Please may I have a one way ticket to wonderland, I can pay with chocolate truffles, sugared almonds or nougat ! Having read your other work I have reached 2 decisions  
1: this is my favorite to date
2: You are a chocoholic!

Thanks for making me smile....John  

Magnus
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22 posted 2007-09-30 12:57 PM


We all would love to have a place like this
to go to...even if only a dream.

Artic Wind
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23 posted 2007-10-01 03:04 PM


EffJayel-

why thank you!
i am very flattered!



how can i thank you

ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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24 posted 2007-10-01 03:05 PM


Mangus-

thank you!

i also enjoy reading your poems

ARCTIC WIND

SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown
25 posted 2007-11-30 08:24 PM


Sounds like the perfect dreamland to me.
Artic Wind
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26 posted 2007-11-30 08:28 PM


Smart Chick

Oh my god, thank you sooooo much

ARCTIC WIND

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