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Mr. Magoo
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Mr. Magoo |
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moondogz Member
since 2007-05-01
Posts 397Great White North |
Mr. Magoo Mr. Magoo How do you do? Have a seat here beside me, There's room for two. He walked on the grass, in his cowboy boots. Said he didn't like blacktop or dandelion roots. I spoke of the weather, the sun and the wind. When I finished my recital, he looked at me and grinned. He didn't say much, as I recall. But in his snakeskin boots, he looked big and tall. He didn't turn back, as he walked away. Didn't say howdy, or have a nice day. But I felt a connection, with Mr. Magoo. When he sat down beside me, there was room for two. |
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Sekishu Junior Member
since 2007-09-17
Posts 36 |
I like this poem. There is always room for two. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Nice... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
moondogz, I enjoyed this little story of Mr. Magoo and you! It made me smile!   EA |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
I Like this title for the poem it gives it a little hip in the the story ARCTIC WIND |
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DennisTheMenace Member
since 2005-09-04
Posts 240 |
nice |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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moondogz Member
since 2007-05-01
Posts 397Great White North |
Thank you; Sekishu, Marchmadness, Earth Angel, Artic Wind, DennisTheMenace and JamesMichael, for your kind words of encouragement. Very much appreciated. moon. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
i love this poem and I think it should be put up to the top GOOD JOB ARCTIC WIND |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
love the fun, "come sit beside me there's room for two", A nice invitation to any one."late" |
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PoppaLoco Member
since 2007-09-23
Posts 83EU, NL, Limburg |
Seems that even to a closed, silent man like Magoo (none the less intriguing) your own open attitude can make a difference. Gives me a warm fuzzy feeling about the world, and hope! Cheers Pops |
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T.Cooper Junior Member
since 2007-11-11
Posts 16Indiana, US |
I loved this, kind of a "there and gone" type of deal. |
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moondogz Member
since 2007-05-01
Posts 397Great White North |
Thanks everyone for your thoughtful remarks, I didn't realized all these pipsters had replied to magoo...so a special thanks to T.Cooper for giving me a heads up. |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
You make me smile with this one. I am glad that there is room for two and I like the simplicity of this poem, but it makes me think. Thank you for sharing. Alison |
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fromme2U Member
since 2007-11-09
Posts 257 |
ooh I enjoyed reading your poem on Mr. magoo.. I think your an awsome writer and a great poet too. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Again, I like to put the thought, that I love your poetry! lol ARCTIC WIND |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Nice one Moondogz, Quite cute in fact, enjoyed Lindsay |
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