Brand New Collection of Sighs

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Open Poetry #41

Brand New Collection of Sighs

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2007-09-22 06:09 PM

Brand New Collection of Sighs

She knocks on my heart
and I open the door
and let her in,
and my thoughts
go back to where
it all began.
Today is as
special as
the beginning,
the first time I
looked into her eyes,
her sweet kisses,
my heartbeat increases,
and now a brand
new collection
of sighs.

JamesLee
22September
2007

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

1 posted 2007-09-22 07:24 PM

Yep sighs gather rogether together and collect in pools. You expressed this well.

a good commitee can decimate communication.

Rick
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia

2 posted 2007-09-22 07:53 PM

Enjoyed this James, sighs of happiness and relief.

Rick

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2007-09-22 08:49 PM

Thank you Kethry and Rick for the nice responses...James

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

4 posted 2007-09-23 11:33 AM

such a pleasant, heart-felt 'write'!

[a most fine tribute to 'Love' and a loved
one!]

much Applause!

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

5 posted 2007-09-23 04:03 PM

James Michael

your poems are always fun to read, when I see one of your poems, i always like to read them!

ARCTIC WIND

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

6 posted 2007-09-23 05:06 PM

You are a true romantic, James.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2007-09-24 05:13 AM

thank you Secondhanddreampoet, Artic Wind and Marchmadness for the wonderful responses...James

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