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After It's Gone
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After It's Gone |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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 ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Oh Lawsy Miss Margie--I have seen that face so many times. Despair makes kin of us when we forget that we are, actually, ONE. Thank you lovie, for this'n.  |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
You are so lyrically right. We need to live in the moment. Love, Joyce |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh this is so so true my dear friend. Well done! Love you.  |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
Sure, there's always the shoulda, coulda, wouldas, but there were many happy, wonderful, unforgetable, treasured memories of days gone by, too. Sadly, we even rue the fact that the good times are behind us, instead of being thankful we experienced them. Thanks for jogging me to think about this, Marge. Rae |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Yes, Marge, so very true. One day we may learn to live so that there are never any regrets. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
There are many stories to be told by the look in his reflective eyes. ~ and you have given us a glimpse of what they might be. Another gem of a post, MT. Loving hug, EO |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: What a heart-touching post and of course a world of truth in it! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
Oh Marge this is so true. Your words with that picture are perfect as usual. Love, Betty |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing Marge...James |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Lady, it seems you and I are in a similar place but your write is so much more eloquent than mine could ever be. *HuGS through cyberspace. a good commitee can decimate communication. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Simple but profound and so true. Sometimes I will be thinking of something that happened in the past or something about the family history and wish I could ask my mother about it (She was always telling family stories) and I wish I would have listened more. Now it's too late. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl, sweetest poetic writer of remembrances, this is beautiful, although that is always a given as you write the most picturesque poems ever. I love this it is truly outstanding. As always Mushy X x x x x x Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
This 'write' is particularly fine! v. serious, long-sustained applause!! |
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Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
My dearest Marge ... this brought tears to both Ron and I. We spent the day with his 93 year young mother at Sophie's 1 year young birthday party over the weekend. The contrast was striking and spending time with Grammy is so very precious to us. She gets frailer by the moment and we treasure what time is left. huggles, Marti Home is not where you live, |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
"Time is most regretted when it's gone" that is a very true line, what a nice poem you have written, good job ARCTIC WIND |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is so true. |
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soulfulnets New Member
since 2007-09-19
Posts 7 |
Amazing expression and oh so true... |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
you always speak the truth Poetess and in the most beautiful tones |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Friends~ I so warmly welcome your replies to this piece~ Someone sent me the photo in a PowerPoint presentation ... and when I saw the look of desolation in the man's eyes ... it just wrote itself~ Love n' *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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