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HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2007-09-22 10:01 AM




Feeling Lost Without You

When I am feeling lost
Would you search for me
If I did not speak again
Will I be in your memory

If I am hidden from view
How could I ever be found
What if there is no clue
Would you search around

Should I leave it to fate
What will the outcome be
Are thoughts reachable
Would you remember me

Have you ever wondered
What I was going through
Had it not been obvious
I feel lost without you

HopeĀ©2007



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Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
1 posted 2007-09-22 10:09 AM


this was beautiful,    I just joined not too long ago' and i posted first poem, so i am so excited to start, have a nice day   ARCTIC WIND
JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
2 posted 2007-09-24 04:03 PM


"Have you ever wondered
What I was going through
Had it not been obvious
I feel lost without you"

I do know this emotion.
Great write HopeS.

JL


Blessed are those who are generous, because they feed the poor.
~Proverbs 22:9 NLT

ameteurpoet101
Junior Member
since 2007-09-24
Posts 18
The island of sunshine, Jamaica
3 posted 2007-09-24 04:44 PM


I didnt want it to end! i'm the new girl around town and i ave'nt posted any of my poems yet i'm just content for now with appreciating peoms like urs.
Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
4 posted 2007-09-24 06:16 PM


Beautiful again!


ARCTIC WIND

EagleScorpion
Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever
5 posted 2007-09-29 02:46 PM


this touches me... and i feel i can relate...

some people just seem to get the best of you, and as quickly as they came, they are out of your life forever..

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