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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2007-09-21 07:35 PM

Sea of Time and Dreams

Summer retreats…
as Autumn comes
in evening’s descent
with a regal moon rising...
(through fine grey clouds
  tipped in crimson)
to dance among sharp-blue
peaks
beyond a velvet-green
forest of pensive pines,
marching to the sparkling
emerald sea...
where time and dreams
  prevail !
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Gaia
1 posted 2007-09-21 10:59 PM

I love those 'pensive pines'
but that 'emerald sea'
really cries out to me.
Marchmadness
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2 posted 2007-09-22 03:38 AM

Beautiful imagery, love your writing.
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3 posted 2007-09-22 10:15 AM


Okay, MrRomantic
... I LOVE the emerald seas~



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OwlSA
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4 posted 2007-09-22 10:51 AM

Much enjoyed!

- Owl
ArtSolstice
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5 posted 2007-09-22 04:34 PM

What a fine palette you paint with here, Poet, and what lovely images you paint with it!
ThisDiamond
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6 posted 2007-09-24 06:02 PM

Regal imagery, so certainly to honor the autumn emeralds, pine to sea.
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7 posted 2007-09-24 06:05 PM



Secondhadnddreampoet-

"Summer retreats…
as Autumn comes"


What a beautiful and poetic poem.
I truly and deeply love to read you poems

with warming Hugs



EA
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