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Autumn Impression
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Autumn Impression |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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Autumn Impression October morning… tentative sunrise. Scattered hills wrapped in pensive mist and frosted-rainbow leaves. Forest trembling with the thought of Winter. Peaceful quietude… fireside serenity. All of Life awaiting change! ~ |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
I'm guilty of not responding to all of your poems but I do read them all and now have a chance to tell you that I thoroughly enjoy them. "All of Life awaiting change!" Yep - I reckon now more than ever. |
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quatro Member
since 2003-04-29
Posts 392Galveston, Texas |
"Scattered hills wrapped in pensive mist and frosted-rainbow leaves." This is my favorite stanza in this very beautiful poem. You have a great talent. thanks for sharing, quatro |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
nice poem ARCTIC WIND |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"tentative sunrise" This image reminded me of my first sunrise in the interior of Alaska, where the sun never seemed to climb high enough in the sky. I wanted to push it up a bit.  |
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ArtSolstice Member
since 2007-03-18
Posts 498 |
The transition and attenuation of this special time of year are captured in this poem. This season of pause before winter -- you articulate the pause brilliantly through the images presented. |
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Bobby Jordan Member
since 2007-08-13
Posts 491Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Secondhanddreampoet, Very nice. Keep them coming. Bobby |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I always enjoy your poetry. It is clean, to the point and full of meaning. Ida |
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ArtSolstice Member
since 2007-03-18
Posts 498 |
Came back again for another read, one of many. This poem is just as fine this time around... greatly enjoyed! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"Scattered hills wrapped in pensive mist and frosted-rainbow leaves." beautiful description poet I feel that pensive mist in the mornings now it holds such autumn promises |
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