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Open Poetry #41
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Tomer
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since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168
Michigan
0 posted 2007-09-21 01:20 PM


Saturday came,
As the tires went flat,
With the brush of her
Wrist sleeping on the
Seeds of his face.

Between the river hour,
On top of their toiled skin,
They lay with their
Folded eyes, their layered hair,

Open under the blankets wrap.
© Copyright 2007 Tomer Fried - All Rights Reserved
Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
1 posted 2007-09-25 09:22 PM

This is a fascinating write, almost sparse in word usage but painting such a vivid picture.

a good commitee can decimate communication.
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