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Loving kiss
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Loving kiss |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia 
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To kiss with every sense of pleasure To lighten soul till it is free Is quite beyond ones words or measure Merely how it just should be To taste a kiss that’s yours and only To feel the breath that whispers love To find that warmth and height of passion Then you share what waits above The sweet caress of lovers bless A taste so true, one longs for more Caught a wanting more not less Than those moments just before Living what my dream had given Scared that maybe soon to wake By this love and moment driven Praying that the bond won’t break |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"The sweet caress of lovers bless A taste so true, one longs for more Caught a wanting more not less Than those moments just before" yes!  couldn't agree more...sure enjoyed this  |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Sea, great to see you here my friend, thank you for your visit and reply, always nice. Rick |
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comoloco7 Junior Member
since 2007-09-21
Posts 31MA |
that is very deep, one of the best ones I've seen on this site. keep up the good work. In the blood soaked battle field, lay the bones of countless millions who in the midst of battle stopped to rest, and resting they died. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
What a delightful read, Rick. Loved it! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
comoloco7, thank you so much for your lovely comment and taking time out to visit me here. Welcome to Passions my friend, you will well enjoy yourself here while sharing your words and ponderings. Honeybunch, always a delight to have you visit here, thank you so much for your comment, always appreciated. James, great to have you visit, thank you for you reply. To you all my friends, thank you so much once again for your replies, will catch you all again a little later. Rick |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh, my.... What a gift.... and in a pleasured return thank you... for all that you give to Passions! |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Rick old friend, you are like a bottle of wine, you are getting better with age,a beautiful poem. Lindsay |
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comoloco7 Junior Member
since 2007-09-21
Posts 31MA |
Rick, of the people who have actually taken the time to read or listen to that particular piece, you have been one out of a hand full that could really comprehend the depth of the emotions felt during that time. I will continue to post my works here in the hopes that you and everyone else would enjoy them. Thank you for the welcome. In the blood soaked battle field, lay the bones of countless millions who in the midst of battle stopped to rest, and resting they died. |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Karilea, loved your reply my friend, thank you so much for your visit and time, always very much appreciated. Hi Lindsay, good to see you here mate, might have a sip of some wine tonight and enjoy. Thanks for the visit and reply. comoloco7, good to see you here again, enjoying your work and a pleasure to reply and be a friend. Take care. To you all my friends, thank you so much for all replying, very much appreciated and enjoyed. All take care. Rick |
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noobster Junior Member
since 2007-09-21
Posts 10 |
RICK, nothing is better than a loving kiss lol sexy poem, well i thought it was  |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
noobster, nice to have you visit here, thank you so much for your reply, very much appreciated. Be well and take care. Rick |
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DennisTheMenace Member
since 2005-09-04
Posts 240 |
I like this, but I'm a big fan of kissing and loving kisses even more |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
DennisTheMenace, thank you again for your comment, I think we all love to be kissing the right person, they are special moments, appreciated your visit. Rick |
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