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Sekishu
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since 2007-09-17
Posts 36


0 posted 2007-09-18 06:10 PM



I wrote this poem awhile ago, I would like to know if anyone thinks its any good

Enter the ancient house of thoughts that will blur your mind

I'll appear a ghost, a heretic, of old

Look in the chest of the dusty attic, and you will find

A picture of my best friend, framed in gold

Memories have no value, and cannot be sold

Stories have no meaning, unless they are told

Loneliness brings death to even the most bold

But a touch brings warmth to the cold

Take me and accept me

And we'll make our own memory, write our own story, and never be lonely


© Copyright 2007 Sekishu - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2007-09-18 06:14 PM


Acceptance...an essential part of any relationship...James
Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
2 posted 2007-09-18 07:11 PM


Greetings, Sekishu! Welcome aboard the pip ship! I hope you enjoy sailing these seas of blue as much as I do.

"Memories have no value, and cannot be sold

Stories have no meaning, unless they are told"

~ Highly profound.

"But a touch brings warmth to the cold

Take me and accept me

And we'll make our own memory, write our own story, and never be lonely"

~ Oh, yes! With warm touches, togetherness, and mutual acceptance, you'll "never be lonely".

May the beautiful story continue!

Giving you a warm, welcoming hug,

Earth Angel

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !
3 posted 2007-09-18 07:32 PM


WELCOME!...I hope you have a most grand time roaming the fine blue sands of 'P.I.P.-land'!
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