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spunkygirl
Junior Member
since 2007-09-18
Posts 46


0 posted 2007-09-18 02:13 AM



You and I will always be our child's parents,
but less is more.
I will always love you to my core,
but less is more.
You will always be in my thoughts and prayers, my dearest friend until forever,
but less is more.
Yes it's true I love your voice, your looks, your grace,
but less is more.

My prayer for you is abundance in Love and friends
release from your pain and debt.
God's grace be upon you.

I only ask for one thing...
              Your understanding
Cause less is more.

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Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
1 posted 2007-09-18 03:29 AM


I guess that says it all.
Welcome aboard from another newcomer.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
2 posted 2007-09-18 08:44 AM


Welcome to the pip circle of friends!

I sense your strength, caring, and quiet resignation in your softly-written words.

"My prayer for you is abundance in Love and friends
release from your pain and debt.
God's grace be upon you."

Giving you a warm, welcoming hug,

Earth Angel

spunkygirl
Junior Member
since 2007-09-18
Posts 46

3 posted 2007-09-19 01:30 AM


Marchmadness Thank you for your encouragement, I am so very new to this.

Earth Angel from your written words to God's ears. Thank you for the warm welcome!

Aimster
Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
4 posted 2007-09-19 08:48 AM


well put. really enjoyed this writing of yours. welcome to PIP!

"Life is not measured by the breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away"

spunkygirl
Junior Member
since 2007-09-18
Posts 46

5 posted 2007-09-20 01:18 AM


Thank you Aimster.
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