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Just Till I Turn Blue Haiku Quartet
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Just Till I Turn Blue Haiku Quartet |
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Bronzeage Member
since 2007-07-20
Posts 197
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Authors note, Sweet olive is a flowering shrub, commonly used in the southern USA as a hedge. Its blossom is very fragrant and is similar to the scent of oranges or apricots. On calm nights, the smell of sweet olive fills the air. Sweet olive perfume breezes keep my eyes awake keeping you with me. Photographic smiles and letters fade in the night when I catch your scent. I inhale, holding my breath hoping to keep you inside forever. Captured in my lungs, throat closed, face in the pillow, air seems less needed. Type II poet. Its worth the work. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Thank you for the info on the sweet olive bush. An orange-scented perfume sounds far more romantic than one that smells like olives. A delicate and sensitive penning.   Linda |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
fine 'write'! Applause!! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
very nice haiku quartet, enjoyed the read  Charisma |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
To inhale such a scent as to never let it go... well done, Sir! |
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nedj Member
since 2006-06-23
Posts 87Oregon USA |
Exquisitely done. Thanks. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Captured in my lungs, throat closed, face in the pillow, air seems less needed. How true! All are beautiful really! Much enjoyed. Love, Margherita |
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